What love is

I rarely write love songs but one day, I came up with this...

I took a chance and turned to stone,

I thought that I could make it,

working on my own,

I turned my back on you to find tomorrow,

but tomorrow didn't come,

I've finally figured out, what I was doing wrong,

I guess I needed you by my side all along,

'cause, there anit no lucky horseshoes, 

lour leaf clovers,

should have know this from the start,

it's two lips meant for each other, 

It's sweet serenades from the heart,

you won't believe it,

when you hear this,

but I finally know what love is...

it is you and me, together as one...

my mind was racing back and fourth,

I wondered if my moral compass did point north,

the things I've done to you,

shouldn't be forgiven,

and yet you always have,

I'm sorry boy, I didn't mean to do you wrong,

I tried to make up, but all I've got is this song,

'cause, there anit no lucky horseshoes, 

lour leaf clovers,

should have know this from the start,

it's two lips meant for each other, 

It's sweet serenades from the heart,

you won't believe it,

when you hear this,

but I finally know what love is...

it is you and me, together as one...

Reviews

[Meliss@k]

I absolutely loved this! Wish I could actualky hear the song now! :) (music and all)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is so romantic and sweet.... i really enjoyed reading that :)

[Zap-the-awesome]

Neat song. Now sing to it and post it on YouTube. XD

[rnuff]

I really enjoyed this write, I see nothing wrong with your grammar.
All I see is one amazing write.

[EverleafOwl]

Aw, so sweet! Very pretty and a solid, delicate ring (that doesn't make sense......hmmmm, brain; do you ever make sense? Brain: ……… Me: oh course). Ignore my wacky mind- brilliant job on this! ;D

[Pretty_as_a_Poet]

tell you the truth, you make perfect sence, that's not weird it's deep!

[EverleafOwl]

Aw, thank you! :) Amazing job!

[five_stars]

Your grammar is fine!

[Another_Lost_soul]

Beautiful