Heaven

Heaven

A Poem by Pretty_as_a_Poet
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My friend dared me to make a dark senryu... here's what I came up with :)

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  With one Lustful blade
My sorrows spill to the floor
   and so does my life

© 2017 Pretty_as_a_Poet



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Poignant with so many hidden messages...great write!

Posted 3 Years Ago


I really love this. Dark and simple. I love the Japanese tone. And life fades away like cherry blossoms sagging into the wind. Or "sagging in the sun."

Please give my writings a read. I think you'll like this one:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/samspennell/1221824/

Posted 3 Years Ago


What a meaningful piece!
Love your great expression but feeling sad at what happened to your life.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Cool! This was really nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


When the darkness hides
our inner self remembers
where nightmares come from.

So many people have their own view of what "darkness" is all about. And we can't disagree because who is to say what is and what isn't.

Posted 4 Years Ago



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Added on May 9, 2013
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Langley, B.C, Canada



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