Death is EVERYWHERE!

Death is EVERYWHERE!

A Story by Lacy Dawn

You don't know when he comes,
Death is everywhere,
HE might come so soon,
Breath will Die there,
He can take your breath away,
Snappy like light,
Please don't leave your friends today,
They stay anywhere,
They need help too,
So help them,
Death will come to them,
So help them stay away.



© 2013 Lacy Dawn



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Lacy Dawn
ignore grammar problems. Sorry my poems aren't so great.

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Not a bad poem. Just need more detail. Would be a good lead for a story. Writing is a constant effort to get better. Each day we need to try to improve. Thank you for sharing the very good poem.
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Posted 4 Years Ago



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