The Lioness favorite meat

The Lioness favorite meat

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

She swirls around her King as he holds her favorite treat.

The fierceness in her eyes makes him aware of his defeat.

 

He steps away from her, increasing her desirability.

Her body water grows, so she gravitates towards him anxiously.

 

Being the first ruler, he allows her to take him down.

She gets on top of him, wearing only her golden crown.

 

He rubs against her fur, as her inner thighs consume her desired meat.

He wishes to interchange, but he knows his LEO never leaves the heat.





© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"



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Ha Ha I figured you are a LEO...it's shown with the bite of your zodiac choice words, a trajectories of a star gazer, yet more in tune with what inflames on the grounded...great piece... watch out for this queen of denial posing as king of the jungle...

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Hahaha I hear you loud and clear,thanks for the review
Totally an awesome work. I really enjoyed reading this piece.. it's a bit funny, lovely, meaningful, sensible, very truthful and beautiful ... Nice work dear, Fana. Your cool.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Hey I'm cool whoo hoo! :-D Thanks Neon I'm glad you enjoyed it
Hahaha smoking,bad kitty! I enjoyed this piece

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it,thanks for the review :-)
Speak Out

4 Years Ago

Roar.......my pleasure
Roar this was hot. lol I guess when it comes to carnal desires we woman are no better than a cat in heat?

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Lol I guess we are,thanks for the review
Thank you for sharing this, I enjoyed it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. Must I mention I saw that you’re from Africa? Words can’t expl.. read more
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I enjoyed this piece. I love how your poetry seems to have a lot of underline feminism in them. Very powerful work. Sensual and pleasant to read. Thank you :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thanks again Cairo
DJ

4 Years Ago

Leo's certainly are powerful and independent :) Well written :)
Very sensual piece! Ahhhhhh, the weakness of holding the meat..... A shared dilemma! Nice pen!

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting
Very thoughtful and even humourous to a point which makes it even better !

Really excellent poem, enjoyed it so much !

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thanks Tom
Amazing! Although i am no expert but it is high on feminism...........that is exactly why i love it more!!!!!
To tell the truth it shows sort of a sweeter side to men, because of this there is a higher increased charm in the poem!

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Hahaha thank you for your nice words
Darkblushedink

5 Years Ago

oh no problem! AND VERY WELCOME! ^.^

Requires a second look...very original.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you! Look forward to reading some of your work in return

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