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A Woman's Worth

A Woman's Worth

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

Twenty toes in a house where no one knows

makes a wrong moment seem so right  

His awkward silence and her tempting body

takes reality out of sight

She had fought the fight to keep her secret prize

for the man who makes her Cinderella dream come true

And in knowing this he assures her, that this is what

he wants to do

Bit by bit he reveals , the quality his eyes were

longing for

Bit by Bit she allows him, whilst he keeps

her nerves under a relaxing score



Her body shyly awaits him, on the bed where

his fantasy meets

He gets on top of her, after he covers

 her awaiting treat

He places his warmth inside her, ensuring

 her that everything would be alright

She moans while she feels the sweetest pain

without feeling any fright  

His hands massages through her long wavy hair

as she follows his double stroke rhythm

She kisses his lips perpetually, hoping that

 her heart will always be with him

Their groaning increases, whilst they melt

in each others arms

She gets worried as she sees a red color,

knowing that he didn't do her any harm

I smile, as I look

at our left fingers today

I guess he did fulfill his promise?

And in my dairy

this special moment will always stay


 


© 2013 "Fanatical Dreamer"



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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

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A warm sincere sensual tone and the way you describe the first time was wonderful.. I absolutely love the words of this poem thank you for sharing..

Posted 3 Months Ago


I love the sensual tone of this poem. Very well written!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

1 Year Ago

Thank you, glad you liked it
A very lovely and passionate piece, made me blush! Very nice write

Posted 1 Year Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

1 Year Ago

Thanks dear
“She had fought the fight to keep her secret prize
for the man who makes her Cinderella dream come true”

“I smile, as I look
at our left fingers today
I guess he did fulfill his promise?
And in my dairy
this special moment will always stay”

These lines clearly underlined the title very well and the writer clearly explains why that moment and the promise kept is very significant to her. The Kenny G background music Innocence, made this piece even more beautiful than it already is. Great expression, you’ve got talent F.D, no doubt!

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you Speak Out for those kind words
Speechless! Well, sort of.......so I will say; great, sensual love story! Enjoyed every line!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I’m glad you enjoyed the Journey I carried you through, one of my most beautiful moment.. read more
This poem is a beautiful expression of the culmination of a marriage ritual. It gets inside of what both are feeling as a promise is delivered. This is the beginning of a fantastic relationship. This would be the first of many first as they enjoy the novelty, and adventure of it all.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and reviewing
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That was a beautiful piece, one filled with kept promise (that is usually broken, with love (which is normally abused), and commitment (which is normally not honored) but all were kept sacred here. What a moving and sensual piece on an honest love. Very moving my friend. I enjoyed it a lot. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you my friend,I'm happy to know you enjoyed it
A beautiful, sensuous, poem, chock a block with sweet physical love between man and woman, so blissfully described and so comforting (for a change) to read that it ended happy ever after !

Beautifully crafted poem, you have talent and style 'Girl' !

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thanks Tom,I'm glad you liked it
Hot, cool, romantic....I liked the poem much....A rhythmic exposure of love.....Thanks for sharing it

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading

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