Memories (Haiku)

Memories (Haiku)

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"




Memories, you’re

a beautiful nightmare in

 an uncertain mind 



© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"



Author's Note

 "Fanatical Dreamer"
My first Haiku

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Truly one of the best haiku's I've read.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

2 Years Ago

Thanks again, glad you liked it.
An excellent haiku--love the way you described both the good and the bad in our memories.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the read
I liked the beautiful pic. with the great delightful words. Nice Haiku, lovely one once again.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
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DJ
This can be interpreted in so many ways, very thought-provoking. You did wonderfully my friend. Thank you, Cairo.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thanks again Cairo for your precious time and review
A very interesting read that can be interpreted many different ways, and that is the true beauty of such powerful words. For your first Haiku you did an outstanding job, loved it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you,I'm glad you liked it
It's clever as it could also be interpreted the other way round; eg. ' Memories, you're
an uncertain nightmare
in a beautiful mind '!

The question being, does it still have the same meaning ?

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Hmmm,interesting?
Wow. This was soooo good...:)

Posted 5 Years Ago


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 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Now you have me blushing ^_^,this was actually the first Haiku I wrote.I'm really happy to hear thos.. read more
Sami Khalil

5 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)
Very soft and sweet, like a spring day. Loved it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you Jack!
a beautiful nightmare in an uncertain mind....this is a nice line, i have never thought about this. beautiful is a good thing but nightmare, how could it be beautiful...that is precisely what makes this write wonderful.

Posted 5 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

5 Years Ago

Thank you for your read and review

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