Living the Unpredictable

Living the Unpredictable

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

Life is a lesson we all must learn.

Today the sun may shine on us

and tomorrow the rain drops may burn.

Life has its questions for the wise

and unwise to see.

Most times they both don’t

always solve their mystery.

One can’t endure this life,

unless they love when there is hate.

One can’t grow stronger,

unless they appreciate.

One can’t move on, until

they forgive the unforgotten.

One must enjoy this life fully, until

it’s time, for their precious bones 

to decay and become rotten.




© 2013 "Fanatical Dreamer"



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umm...i love the feel of this write

it tantalizes, while it prophesizes! And all the better that it imparts practical wisdom

Are we not all endeavoring to embrace our mortality while we yet strive to embrace our immortality?

I like the simple play of words:

"One can’t endure this life,
unless they love when there is hate.
One can’t grow stronger,
unless they appreciate.
One can’t move on, until
they forgive the unforgotten."

what makes really good poetry and prose is the capacity to evoke an emotional response from ones reader..."adequate technique to evoke an emotional impact" one great writer said

What I value in this poem is the interplay between intellectual philosophizing and simple poetic rhyming

Very nice, you have a great potential I hope to see you realize fully!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

1 Year Ago

Thanks much for your well thought review
Rikkevi Rue

1 Year Ago

sure. any time!
very individual rhythm of age and without a bitter pill taste, just lets taste of things in human nature fall where ever they may lay...great piece "One" universally can understand..

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
I read it 3 times and each line leaves me to say SO TRUE! You've got a lot to offer F.D. keep writing

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you,I'm happy to know this
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K
Beautiful and nice poem. Great.
Please do also visit my profile and review my work if you feel like.

Amazing piece of writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

I will, thanks for the invite and taking the time to review my piece
K

4 Years Ago

You are welcome :)
It's a cool poem, i loved the rhythm of the piece. I enjoyed the theme, the realistic moments're captured into the poem very well and that's the thing i loved much into the poem. Very unique write, an extraordinary concept, this poem has it's some kinda dashing quality. Wonderful piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
Indeed, we must live our life to the fullest before we take our final rest. wonderful thought in here.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
I agree with your sentiments here.
The poem felt a little forced in spots, but with very little tweaking, you have something very nice.
Your thoughts are well received and appreciated.

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!
I love how the poet's wise outlook is depicted here. Well penned :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thanks Rhea
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DJ
I love the message and lessons through-out this piece, all of them are so very true. A wise and honest write :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

4 Years Ago

Thank you!

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