Karma

She sees our true colors,under the darkest light.

She comes knocking unexpectedly,when our

action gives her an open invite.

We ought to be careful,what our selfish mind

and body may say or do.

If wrong is what we choose,best believe!

Miss Karma, will make herself present,

all around us to. 

Reviews

[Horcrux_Phoenix]

This poem describes karma in a way I have never seen before. Great, great work!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for the read and comment

[btopasna]

We've all heard of "What goes around, comes around."
Yet, simply put into a different complex like this, it is all the more powerful.
Great work!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank you for reading and commenting

[_Hanabi_]

This is very insightful. It is short, but how well it is put, tells us straight off what the point is.
i myself and i believe many others may be able to relate to exactly what this poem is about.
Basically what goes around comes back around. everything you do, all actions have consequences weather good or bad, you mess up, or do something you know now or from before that you shouldn't have you will be punished. As they say, "exactly what you put out, expect to get in return, but tenfold"

beautiful poem!
Good Job! keep it up!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for the review

[BrokenArted]

Powerful pen. This was well put. "Miss Karma, will make herself present." That's quite true!

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for reading and commenting

[Sami Khalil]

"best believe!
Miss Karma, will make herself present,
all around us to."

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for your review

[Sami Khalil]

:).................

[gabrielle]

what goes around comes around...nicely penned

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank You!

[Linda alexander]

Food for thought to all of us, but at times the effect of karma is slow and have room temperature at least some times, enjoyed the poem

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thanks for reading I'm glad you like it

[Linda alexander]

You welcome

[Sami Khalil]

A good description of it. A powerful write...:)..................

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank You!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...........

[Matching Socks]

Karma... She sure keeps us in check. Good write.

["Fanatical Dreamer"]

Thank You!