Karma

Karma

A Poem by "Fanatical Dreamer"

She sees our true colors,under the darkest light.
She comes knocking unexpectedly,when our
action gives her an open invite.
We ought to be careful,what our selfish mind
and body may say or do.
If wrong is what we choose,best believe!
Miss Karma, will make herself present,
all around us to. 



© 2014 "Fanatical Dreamer"



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This poem describes karma in a way I have never seen before. Great, great work!

Posted 1 Year Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

1 Year Ago

Thanks for the read and comment
We've all heard of "What goes around, comes around."
Yet, simply put into a different complex like this, it is all the more powerful.
Great work!

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and commenting
This is very insightful. It is short, but how well it is put, tells us straight off what the point is.
i myself and i believe many others may be able to relate to exactly what this poem is about.
Basically what goes around comes back around. everything you do, all actions have consequences weather good or bad, you mess up, or do something you know now or from before that you shouldn't have you will be punished. As they say, "exactly what you put out, expect to get in return, but tenfold"

beautiful poem!
Good Job! keep it up!

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thanks for the review
Powerful pen. This was well put. "Miss Karma, will make herself present." That's quite true!

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading and commenting
"best believe!
Miss Karma, will make herself present,
all around us to."


Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thanks for your review
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

:).................
what goes around comes around...nicely penned

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thank You!
Food for thought to all of us, but at times the effect of karma is slow and have room temperature at least some times, enjoyed the poem

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thanks for reading I'm glad you like it
Linda alexander

3 Years Ago

You welcome
A good description of it. A powerful write...:)..................

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thank You!
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)...........
Karma... She sure keeps us in check. Good write.

Posted 3 Years Ago


 "Fanatical Dreamer"

3 Years Ago

Thank You!

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