Loneliness

LONELINESS

You striked me many times

and fallen a hundred times

your company fills my every night

emptied my dreams with a sigh

 

O loneliness,

you knocked me a million times

and I swear I am defiant everytime

though your power is beyond me

I wont let you over me

Reviews

[NeiL ArandA]

It has been your constant friend and familiar companion. Though you tried to resist. Its all you got. Very nice Lei... Dhaye recommended your poems to me. This one I can really relate. Thanks for sharing

[Strider Marcus Jones]

An interesting short poem with wonderful phrasing to explore a universal theme. 100/100

[lei]

wow 100/100 thank you Strider :)

[Antoñyo]

Cleverly-written piece with amazing strength in such a small space.
O the wars some of us fight just to make it from one day to the next!

Thanks for sharing

[lei]

Antonyo, thank you for taking the time to read this :)

[joshua deathdealer]

This a familiar feeling given a very unique twist. I really enjoyed this. Well done.

[lei]

Joshus, im glad you enjoyed reading this piece, thank you :)

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

Being lonely is normal, but you're right...don't let it go over you.
Nice poem. Inspiring one.

[lei]

thank you kabayan :)