Hope

 

As my last hope

vanish as the day

new hope grows

When the soft light shine

when nothing matters but

everything does matter,

when nothing is wrong yet

nothings right. Let

my hope be endless

and never fade away

from midday's sun.

Let the angels sing

at my hope in

the dark sun.

Let the earth

receive my blood with

everlastin joy. May I

see what grows with

wild ambition never

brave or daunted

and yet satisfied with me.

Let the spirits of the damned

and those of joy and sadness

sing with me as does

my broken soul with

joy and glee

Reviews

[Adela Muresan]

I like the you present the positive energy of hope inside, despite the fact the past's wounds still hurt.
Great write great write.

A.M.

[Laura Sparkle]

"when nothing matters but
everything does matter,
when nothing is wrong yet
nothings right"

Hehe, I know that feeling. :) Great message, great write. :)

[The Tao of Bri]

MAY IT BE!! BELLISIMO! BRILLIANT@!

[Keeley]

ok, I'm kinda jealous that I didn't write this!! I seriously loved it!

[DRIVEN]

Looking for hope anew with a broken soul, that yet sings with joy and glee...showing the everlasting need for hope when all is lost and broken....beautiful

[Butterflyjean]

I felt the struggle of the light and the darkness which seemed to be seductive. It reminds me of someone smiling in the midst of tragedy.

[Emily B]

what a triumphant, glorious song!

[Pink Poison]

I truly love this poem. I am envious that I didn't write it. Great job.