Flower by Levi Levin

Flower by Levi Levin

A Poem by Levi Levin

Flower by Levi Levin

Flower tell me your secrets, you have so much power?

 

 

Never has an object transmitted such emotion,

or been arrayed with such beauty.

 

 

Your power lifts the spirit of mankind,

your fragrance toucheth the heart and the mind.

 

 

Your pedals paint many pictures for us to ponder,

your colors invite us into worlds of wonder.

 

 

I cannot think of nature without you,

please continue to bless us with your love and virtue.

 

 

Unto God your creator we thank very much,

for lending you to us, when we need a touch.


© 2016 Levi Levin



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mou
yes that gentle petals warm the heart always..I too love it..your words and rhyme are very beautiful
mou.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Levi Levin

9 Months Ago

Thanks so much for stopping by!
mou

9 Months Ago

You're most welcome :)
personification of the flower is inspiring .. enjoy the straight forward simple language .. i might try another word for "toucheth" and "Unto" tho... seems out of place and from another era in contrast to the rest of the poem ;) i like the strength of the couplets and the rhyming ... and i really enjoy how you have lifted the lowly flower to a high position it deserves ... the daffodils are blooming here ..and the deciduous trees starting to give that hue of green before budding ... peace and joy sir!
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Beautifully written! Great job =)

Posted 3 Years Ago


Levi Levin

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
You painted a picture with your words. Beautiful.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Levi Levin

3 Years Ago

Thank you, I appreciate it--Levi
Thy muse is hailed the Lily then.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

Yes, it intrigues me:)
ErosNthanatos

5 Years Ago

good choice
Any particular kind of flower that touches you?

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

hmmmm thinking..interesting question
ErosNthanatos

5 Years Ago

I noted that the title pertains to one.
Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

The lily:)
nice. stay humble! :)

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

Thank you so much:) That is my desire.
mhaie

5 Years Ago

:) I adore the way your attitude is.
In our times, It's rare to come across gratefulness for all the beauty of nature. So this poem is really appreciated. And it's as beautiful as a flower too.

Thanks for writing this and sharing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

Thank you D :) I always appreciate your words.
DIVYA

5 Years Ago

you're welcome :)
A lovely poem, so short and sweet
with beautiful descriptions, for all of us you speak!
What a beautiful picture in my mind to keep =D

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

Excellent poetic review :)
reading this gives such a serene feeling! good job levi!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Levi Levin

5 Years Ago

Thank you Saroosh:)

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