Find Me

A poem written by me

Find me,

where all our sorrows go,

and the sun is only a dream,

and the thunder is a constant,

beating drum.

Find me,

where the horizon touches the sky,

and the land is shrouded,

in a deep black,

darkness.

Find me,

where our dreams go to die,

and the land is barren,

and shrouded in the fog

of misery.

Find me,

and bring me back into,

the light.

Reviews

[Cid]

Review :
Yup! Sounds good!
Yeah, it's a nice and an interesting write to read. The world is very nice and beautiful either, when we get lost into the beauty of the world to see the Ever Green Nature, a voice from a heart comes and whispers into the ear that 'Find Me' because if you can find the beauty, you can find yourself. Sometimes the coldness makes the air cold but sometimes when we feel the coldness of the winds from the heart, we ascertain, observe and feel the glamours of the reality, dreams, fantasy and beauty, the beauty of our inner feelings that raised when we live our life with humanity at all.

Rating : 100/100!
Note : It's an amazing and damn interesting poem. I really adore this poem.

[katnisscat]

i think this is your best one so far.

[Andrew Kaiser]

Amazing poem! I really enjoyed it!

[Sami Khalil]

I have found a good write...Thank you for sharing...:)...................

[D Muller]

With a poem like this, how can you not be in the light, or enlightened then? Great poem!!

[annabellee]

This is a really great poem, very relatable. We all need somebody to find us and bring us back into the light sometimes.
well done :)

[ZeniaK]

If your looking for people to find you... I think you've come to right place. There are so many people on WC to reach out to, and I'd say about everyone (myself included) can relate to this. Love this, so raw and true.

[Ashiq B]

Really enjoyed reading this poem. On a personal level I can relate to it too. Thanks Lucia for such a nice poem.

[zainul]

I promise you Lucia to find you at the places you advised.
I hope to find you and bring you back into the light.
I am very impressed to read such a nice poem.

[Weeping Angel]

Wow. That's all i can say. This is the type of poem that deserves to be dissected by classes from their textbooks.