Leaving You

This is an acrostic poem. Read the first letter of every line. You can also read the poem that goes with it. :)

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Leaving You

 

 

My suspicions proved right.

I saw here leaving in the night.

Staying together is not an option

Today my heart was out up for adoption.

Really, we never even had a chance.

Unease, our careful little dance.

Still, even now, you ignore my plight,

Taking away your love.

 

Trying and failing,

Our love lives derailing,

Realizing you’re bailing,

Ending our love.

 

Ugly were all the lies

Sitting in front of my very eyes.

 

Any trust we had was gone,

Playing your game, and I was just a pawn.

Always and forever I thought we would be,

Right now the only thing I can see is you

 Taking away your love.

 

Author's Note

Good rhythm?

Reviews

[Antony]

Good flow and good rhyming, "Mistrust Tore Us Apart" that is the usual reason, which ends relationships, I am in awe of your writing at such a young age. This is a great acrostic.
Antony

[HorHay3]

really good its deep