Just Fog

Just Fog

A Poem by EdenHarper
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a sonnet

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You think fog is just fog

But it is so much more

It’s like a lonely dog

Wondering what’s in store

Fog creeps in every street

It’s filling every crack

It’s grabbing at your feet,

And pushing at your back

Whispering in your ear

Its secrets, fables, tales

So far away and near

In its voice hidden trails

Making you glance behind

For something you won’t find.


© 2012 EdenHarper



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EdenHarper
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I really like the middle part:

"Fog creeps in every street
It’s filling every crack
It’s grabbing at your feet,
And pushing at your back"


it really stood out for me.


Posted 5 Years Ago


EdenHarper

5 Years Ago

thank you so much! I love a good review more than anything :)
I like this poem, very imaginative

Posted 5 Years Ago


EdenHarper

5 Years Ago

:) thank you so much for reading!
Enjoyable form. I especially like the last two lines, for the speak the loudest truth. ~pat

Posted 5 Years Ago


EdenHarper

5 Years Ago

I had to re-write the ending several times because I was never fully satisfied until I settled on th.. read more
Fabulous fog
Lonely dog
Make party
Cute blog!

Amazing sonnet.
Its abab cdcd efef gg rhyming is sooooooooooooooo sweet!
The lovely imagery makes me very happy.
Don't want to isolate any line for the whole piece is a fragrant flower.
Congratulations!!!

Posted 5 Years Ago


zainul

5 Years Ago

You are always welcome,lovely poet.
It seems that you are known to me for ages.
Do,I hav.. read more
EdenHarper

5 Years Ago

I wrote them all at separate times but posted them together :) I definitely will!
likewise!
zainul

5 Years Ago

Thank you,Eden.
Thought like that.
That would be my pleasure :)

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Added on August 18, 2012
Last Updated on August 19, 2012
Tags: fog, weather, creepy, mystical, mysterious, glance

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I'm a student living in colorful Colorado. I love photography, a good fictional book and driving with the windows down. I try to see the beauty in the little things in Gods creation and can't wait to .. more..

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