Useless

another poem, sick of me yet? just to say!!!: This isn't about me, so don't like, feel bad for me! (pssh, 7 year relationship, I think not)

I live to make you happy.

The only reason you are still living is because of me.

It's taken me so long to realize that.

you are a mess without me.

But, your making me a mess.

I need more love than you can give.

because, I've given all of mine to you.

I've given you everything.

My love, my time-7 years to be exact.

I'll never be a mother because you don't want children.

And of course I've accepted that fact.

I've moved to a different country so that we could be together.

Because you just had to live in the city.

You never did respect my humble country life style.

But when all is said and done.

i'm not really useless.

I'm only useless to myself.

It seems i've been of much use to you.

 

Author's Note

Poems don't have to rhyme! (juuust saying, mine hardly ever do)
and again this poem isn't about any relationship I've ever had
Thanks for reading! =)

Reviews

[Gionelly Kiss]

Interesting short, choppy style. The poem makes me relate, particularly, to my journal entries when I was younger. Very well done. And, it is true, poems do not have to rhyme (mine do not either). Just go with your style and write. Quick suggestion: you do not have to put a period after every line in poetry; just add them where you want to provide emphasis or where truly needed. Just keep that in mind. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing...
gionelly*kiss

[LivingDeath]

I like this alot, great job :) 10/10