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I wonder!!!

I wonder!!!

A Poem by leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)
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"Thoughts that are raised in everyone's mind but not all get to write about it"

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I wonder
How different this life would be
If I had nothing new every day to see

I wonder
How different this life would be
If the emotions never changed in me

I wonder
How different this life would be
If I could see the same flying bee daily

I wonder
How different this life would be
If there was nothing new to drink except a tea

I wonder
How different this life would be
If waves remained calm in the sea

I wonder
How different this life would be
If there was nothing around except oak tree

I wonder
How different this world would be
If calamities never occured naturally

I wonder
How different this world would be
If I wouldn't have to see anyone in agony

I wonder
How different this world would be
If there was no one to rule me except me 

I wonder
How different this world would be
If everything would remain the same around me

I wonder
How different life in this world would be
If love would suppress the evil in WE

I wonder
I wonder.....

© 2017 leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)



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leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)
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This was thought provoking and very well written. I wonder about a lot of the same things. It is interesting that you make it as if you are within time but without. Seeing the same things every day but still having the freedom of ruling yourself. That is almost insanity. Having the control over life but not being able to change it. Well done. I love it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot!!! It makes me feel good that you could relate to it!!! I truly appreciate your honest .. read more



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This was thought provoking and very well written. I wonder about a lot of the same things. It is interesting that you make it as if you are within time but without. Seeing the same things every day but still having the freedom of ruling yourself. That is almost insanity. Having the control over life but not being able to change it. Well done. I love it.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)

1 Month Ago

Thanks a lot!!! It makes me feel good that you could relate to it!!! I truly appreciate your honest .. read more
Love it !! 👌 we wonder about a lot of things... the things you wrote and the way you wrote them are very good. Nice one :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)

2 Months Ago

Thank you :)
'If there was no one to rule except for me' - I imagine would end as all such dictatorships end - in sorrow

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Super read! Like the poetic liberty

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 24, 2017
Last Updated on September 24, 2017
Tags: Life, world, love, agony, pain, calamities, natural, different, rule, me, oak, tree, tea, bee, daily, sea, see, evil, we

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leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)
leetherandomwriter (Lijo Abraham)

Dubai, United Arab Emirates



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Hi... I started writing small poems few years back which was just a small way of expressing my feelings by adding rhymes. My friend use to like it and she use to reply back in a similar manner and t.. more..

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