Red Man

Red Man

A Poem by Sonya

                Cast the joy! Cast the pain!

                Twas a joyous night never plain,

                Both beauty and beast have never been perfect,

                Though a party this good was so very hectic.

                The Red Man dances along with his  subjects.

                The subjects remain as eternal rejects

                Relinquish thy self from fear of good tidings,

                Treasure you lost, now in good hidings.

               Realize that your purity will plummet,

                For you now remain the Red Man's puppet.

                Veins cold while walls hot.

                Flames through winter, your soul caught.

                The Red Man welcomes all with open arms.

                For he cannot wait for party alarms.

                Ah! My child do not believe his trickery!

                For he may might have poisoned your curry.

                He dances along with an odd crown,

                Two spikes rest. Eyes that may make you drown.

                 He never trips with that tail that sweeps the floor.

                 He'll rot your body straight to the core.

                 

 

                 Cast the joy! Cast the pain!

                 Twas a joyous night never plain.

                  But remember my child that though this quite tempting

                  The party above is for those with His Blessing.


© 2009 Sonya



Author's Note

Sonya
Hopefully you can help out with the rhythm.

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A very different poem, on the devil itself! Enjoyed it a lot. Nice and interesting write :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Hm sounds like a poem to the devil lol I really like it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very clever write. You gave us an excellent mental picture to go along with the words. Liked this much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very creative piece about an Evil Man. I love the rhyme scheme. Even though some people believe that rhyming doesn't make poetry this is a perfect example about how it does. I love the imagery you create. Keep writing. Its great.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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sweat flow and structure.. certainly a great read..

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the rhythm is great!!!

interesting piece. I had to read it three times to really get into it and get the geist of it.. but that's good right?

keep it coming:!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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