Raindrop

Never give up :)

A raindrop joins a river
In hopes
To flow thousands of miles
To meet all the fish
To see all the land
To rush down a waterfall
To start from here
And end up at sea...
But then the rain stops,
The sun comes out,
And the raindrop evaporates
Back into the sky,
Only to fall again the next day
And continue its adventure.

Reviews

[Esther]

You're very talented. So much better than I was when I was 11! Nice work :)

[SpiceCookie]

Thank you so much! :)

[Shy Joe]

I enjoyed this. Great write. Thanks for sharing.

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! :)

[DoormanDan]

Oh, I would get very aggravated if I was that raindrop and that kept happening to me! This poem is a nice little personification of a raindrop. I really enjoyed reading this, and certainly won't look at a raindrop the same again! :)

[SpiceCookie]

Thank you! :)

[Megan Nicole]

I love this! Great use of personification! :)

[SpiceCookie]

Thanks! :)