Sweet Seduction

The feeling of your soft lips wandering down my neck Always lingering in my mind Every night,every day The sweet memory of your gentle touch Creating an ache i cant explain Something i dont understand In someway left unsatisfied To hunger for something unknown Yet instinctively known Like an unfinished puzzle Only you can put together The sweet promises of your kisses Captivate me, an unspoken challenge Too tempting to ignore and no will to resist with every caress leaves me breathless demanding helplessly for more every loud cry, every soft moan faded as you wispered gently in my ear sing to me let yourself be free, free to love me

Reviews

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This is a wonderfully deep and tantalizing poem. It makes you Absoluty feel the desire and the passion flowing through it.

The sweet memory of your gentle touch
Creating an ache i cant explain
Something i dont understand
In someway left unsatisfied

The lovely feel of two lovers begining and Feeling fot the first time. Awesome!

[The Nude Writer]

Beautifully erotic :) I felt very relaxed and loved :) hehe

[John Fitzgerald]

very passionate and full of longing. love the last line, let yourself be free,
free to love me. well done.

[kingblaq]

nice piece.. EROTHICK(sic)

[Dream Weaver]

Very well written, a sweet seduction of a read.

[MAC]

love this unchained piece. love without limitations...desire unbound. excellent write!!

[Eagle Cruagh]

I will try again--- My first review vanished.

Sing to me, let yourself be free, free to love me.

How can mortal man ever be expected to repeat such
perfect words. Your perfect man, breathing in your
ear, words of passion, wisdom and strength.
My heart bleeds for you , I ache for your mind and
body to recover , to remember this sweet love, to
never forget. You will feel again, but your memories
will help you to regain the feeling that was.
Absolutely beautiful and perfectly written.
---- John

[Shy Girl]

The idea of a gentle lover is so forgien sometimes that we really aren't sure what "gentle" intales. But I will say that this lover of yours can teach a few some lessons.. I am abso in love with the picture you told from your heart..even though you miss the connection and feel of his softness next to you. The warmth that seeps into your being as you share time and space within eachothers arms. Seems as an eternity between being with them and having to await the next time to share loving embraces. But...some of your images could also be just from laying snuggled watching tv or companionable book reading. The constant touch of hands...whispers in ears...kisses shared don't always have to have intent behind them. They just are..because we love to show affection towards our other half. Beautiful pictures you have sent out with these words of yours. I abso love how it's like you are musing to yourself and thinking of all the wonder as you write in your diary about him :) Another lovely write :)

[Antonio Valentino]

To hunger for something unknown
Yet instinctively known
Like an unfinished puzzle
Only you can put together

awww.. really liked this part.. its so true, isnt it..

glad i stopped by.. :)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You have a unique style .... you telling your story in such a wonderful way , make me want to listen to your Voice ... you touching most intimate and sensative subject with a tender touch of your words .. beautiful :) Yossi

[tkersh]

Very sensual!
Try being more specific with something "unknown": do you mean mysterious? haunting? exotic? secret?
Your poems are about you, so let us see the flavor of something only you would say!