Moving On

Moving On

A Poem by Black Rose

Every night and day,
You ask if i'm okay,
Do you really think I am?
After what you did.
I lost all my hope,
Of ever seeing you again,
Suddenly you return,
What were you thinking?
Now you want me back,
I'm lost in my own feelings,
You left me in the rain,
Don't you understand my pain?
I don't know,
What to do,
I am still,
In love with you.
Every time I pretend,
That i'm okay,
But that's not the way,
I feel.
I'm tired of pretending,
That nothing happened,
You lost my trust,
And I lost my hope,
So I decided,
I'm going on without you.

© 2013 Black Rose


Author's Note

Black Rose
I wrote this for the girls who got their heart broken.
The guy just isn't worth your tears.

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Again, I just really like your style of writing..... It isn't really in any particular format or discipline.... but its directness in few words is what defines poetry, and you consistantly nail it ! Great writing !

Posted 11 Years Ago


Black Rose

11 Years Ago

Thanks again..... lol, those are only my recent poems because I improved thanks to someone's advice,.. read more
KurKota

11 Years Ago

You are welcome.
"I'm going on without you." I'll drink to that...If I did drink, but I don't...so I raise my diet coke to that...I'm gonna make a banner out of this poem..."Your not WORTH it!!!!" So true. I love this poem. Thank you for writing it, dear Michelle.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Black Rose

11 Years Ago

Thanks I'm glad you like it Anna L.
char

11 Years Ago

Just Anna will do. No formal crap, okay? We're pals. Don't call me Anna L anymore :)
Black Rose

11 Years Ago

Ok Anna.
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Posted 11 Years Ago


Black Rose

11 Years Ago

Lol

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