Simplicity

Simplicity

A Poem by Donald Meikle

Famousisity slips into hidden corners


Teasetauntingly closer so far away


Sometimes almost reachable


But then who needs it


Privacisity is so free to find and hide in


Where Thoughts have no limit


And pens need no ink

© 2015 Donald Meikle


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I'm sorry but I find these words grate a lot particularly when they seem to be replacing simpler words. E.g. famousisity for fame and privacisity for privacy. Why bother? The other compound word seems to convey something worthwhile. Your other reviewers seem quite ok with this so maybe I'm just missing something.
Well done though.alan

Posted 8 Years Ago


Donald Meikle

8 Years Ago

all done without complicity, I'll take the blame for most of it
its simply perfect :) you have portrayed every word perfectly.

Posted 8 Years Ago


You've created words that have a life, a jaunt of their own. They are the Madonnas that gleam in the spotlight, from which the poem springs forth.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Indeed! A gorgeous piece of art you got here, dear poet :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Words honestly fail me on this one. It's just so beautiful and perfect. It needs no applause because it is. Well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Donald Meikle
Donald Meikle

Halifax, MA



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Liverpool born,USNavy vet. Enjoying first marriage. three daughters, (two bathrooms) one until they left. (a tree that loves me) Poet thru geneology) Scot Irish. Living in New England more..

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