clouds

Just me drifting

Clouds
often drift
across this limited vision

Rolling in and out
of
my circumstance

Clouds
you see
in silent somber sleep
cannot yet awaken
the dreamer
that resides in me!

Oh yes
in trembling shards of light
from inside the darkest night
bolts of blue and red
perhaps thats in my head
come clouds
of
grey
that shatter, and fragment
all that remains of
me.

Reviews

[SINDE]

The pen hasn't really lost it's lustre my friend. The imagery and your words as usual deliver justice and exhibit untold prowess.

Clouds
you see
in silent somber sleep
cannot yet awaken
the dreamer
that resides in me!

I love this particular beautifully crafted line. Keep your pen moving. Welcome back.

[Undying Glory]

nice writing and very great poem here! you haven't lost your touch!! this was very vivid and picturesque writing here, and also that picture topped everything off very very nicely. :)
it kind of helps if the picture's a little smaller though ><
great writing!!

[Lindsey]

Very beautiful

[realmwriter]

Don't let the clouds become the darkness in your light, because it shines ever so bright in this piece even if the clouds try to break your train of consciousness...! Very well done.

[JanieB]

I really like this alot. Flows beautifully.

[PerlySunflower]

First of all welcome back, second-love that photo
And third-what a beautiful poem, your ink seems to have not run out.
Wonderful write

[Emily Burns]

you've been missed

[Coyote Poetry]

You gave me nice visions and took me to good places with the amazing poetry. It is good to have time to notice the clouds. I like the description and the beautiful use of the language. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Chris G. Vaillancourt]

Excellent read

[Lilly]

First day back writing - glad to see you around again :) and looks to me you haven't lost your touch! This is a lovely poem with nice imagery. I particularly like the third stanza of this.
Nice work.