clouds

clouds

A Poem by Linear
"

Just me drifting

"
Clouds
often drift
across this limited vision

Rolling in and out
of
my circumstance

Clouds
you see
in silent somber sleep
cannot yet awaken
the dreamer
that resides in me!

Oh yes
in trembling shards of light
from inside the darkest night
bolts of blue and red
perhaps thats in my head
come clouds
of
grey
that shatter, and fragment
all that remains of
me.

© 2011 Linear


Author's Note

Linear
First day back......................first writing in a long while :O)

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The pen hasn't really lost it's lustre my friend. The imagery and your words as usual deliver justice and exhibit untold prowess.

Clouds
you see
in silent somber sleep
cannot yet awaken
the dreamer
that resides in me!

I love this particular beautifully crafted line. Keep your pen moving. Welcome back.


Posted 12 Years Ago


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Great imagery and great formatting, that really stood out to me, the way you broke up each stanza. The descriptions are great. Nicely written.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love, love the imagery and the story it foretold! Excellent read!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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