Love Made Me

Love Made Me

A Poem by Linda Marie Van Tassell
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Love made me more than I thought I could be.

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Love made me shy when I wanted to sing

like bird song sonata with golden hue.

Love made me soar on the happiest wing

on grand sails of splendor through sapphire blue.


Love made me bliss like a new morning flame

like fingertips touching the hand of day.

Love made me bloom when you whispered my name

pressing my petals in pleasure to lay.


Love made me reflect upon every word

like a willow with sleeves in the river.

Love made me listen and listening heard

light strings of rain that made the leaves shiver.


Love made me fall like the folds of a gown

or the unbraiding of Rapunzel’s hair.

Love made me soft as a feather in down

or the sound of silence when snow falls fair.


Love made me spill all my secrets to tell

like the rapids of a waterfall vein.

Love made me blush like a rose in the dell

plucked by the wind in a zither of rain.


Love made me cling like a moth to the moon

or bottle-green moss in a forest square.

Love made me sweet as a meadow in June

whose fragrant flowers are scenting the air.


Love made me more than I thought I could be

and made me wish I was perfect for you.

Love made me silk like the silk of the sea

whose dreaming dampness was channeled for two.


Love made me drown in a backwash of tears

as if a thundercloud burst in my breast.

Love made me shoulder its shadow for years

like Atlas holding the sky in the west.


Love made me leave when I wanted to stay,

and my heart hemorrhaged on blades of grass.

Love made me waver as I crawled away,

and your silence shattered like shards of glass.


Love made me curl into bittersweet cry

like autumn leaves huddled in patchwork heaps.

Love made me still, with a yearning to fly,

like a child dreaming whenever she sleeps.


Love made me whole, and it made me divine.

Love encased butterflies within my heart.

Love made me weak; yet, it strengthened my spine

when the harvest moon dimmed its light to part.


Love made me turn for a moment undone,

halting in the hope of a sign from you.

Love made me numb as you set for the sun

knowing the sun would soon set in me too.


Love made me new as a garden in spring

or a river-washed range of desert sky.

Love made me a pen, whose point is to sing,

to tug loose the tears that wade in the eye.


Love made me a cloud to rain in my soul,

to drink in the ink of the ocean’s swell.

Love made me a petal and petiole

to rise in glory before glory fell.



© 2017 Linda Marie Van Tassell



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Linda Marie Van Tassell

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This is so beautiful. As always, your words flow with such grace and wonder that I find it hard to believe that any human being could compose it ... it seems to have fallen from the heavens.
The way you illustrate the varius shades of love, its tender moments, its passionate moments, how it gives one courage, how it can tear one apart, how it endures ... is so vivid and enthralling that while reading, I found myself holding my chest. This may be my favorite of yours for (to me) it epitomizes your style - the poignant delicacy in your expressions, the abstract beauty of your descriptions, the sheer wonder and openness of your imagery, the etheral nuances that bleed through your every line ... I could go on and on.
The lines that especially struck me in this piece (though all of them were brilliant) had to be:

"Love made me a pen, whose point is to sing,
to tug loose the tears that wade in the eye."

Excellent work!

- William Liston

Posted 4 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Linda Marie Van Tassell

4 Months Ago

Dear William,

Thank you for taking the time to not only read the poem but for taking .. read more



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Very beautiful. Very touching
Words from the heart.that's where the honesty comes.well done

Posted 5 Days Ago


There have been countless volumes written about love and how people experience it and it never ceases to fascinate me that there's always so much more to say. You've really gone to great lengths to discuss various subtle and not so subtle nuances that render different facets of love. You've danced it around the room without trepidation. It was very pleasant to have read especially with the music you offer up to enjoy it with.

Posted 1 Week Ago


that was beautiful well done, the presentation was amazing, you were able take the word love and make it into a beautiful poem, beautiful :) :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


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Love made me whole, and it made me divine.
Love encased butterflies within my heart.
Love made me weak; yet, it strengthened my spine
when the harvest moon dimmed its light to part...


Havent read something beautiful like that before. One word love and one life to go.....Wish to be in love forever.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


This is really quite wonderful and I loved so many of the lines. I'm of the opinion that love takes the rap for an assortment of pains that are caused by something entirely different from love...like misplaced faith or unrealistic expectations. Loss causes lasting pain and leaves scars upon the soul. But loss is not love. Love is the thing which remains and reminds us of our loss. Love is held guilty by emotional association. But I believe love is always good and love is eternal. I love my father though he has been gone for over three decades now. I love my mother and she has been gone nearly seven years. I do not say "loved" because the love for them lives in me and how can one say, "I died yesterday?" But this piece is delightful and beautiful and I very much enjoyed reading every line of it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


The words are smooth and flowing like a stream,
through thoughts of golden hue and songs to sing.
Each quatrain bring another step to team,
with all the others which have taken wing.

Delightful how your carried us along,
from shyness through the rapids of a falls.
No matter of the pressure or how long,
the ambiance of loving fills the walls.

This verse shows us a master at her work.
One day we'll find it's passed this golden glow.
And then, demand the patience of housework,
to keep alive reflections in the know.

Past deeds rush in with joy to make a case,
Ignoring all those tears upon the face,


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Part of me thinks it is a little long, but I can't think of a word I would change. I quite enjoyed reading this.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Linda Marie Van Tassell

2 Weeks Ago

I agree. It took weeks to write this poem, and I thought it would never end. Once I started, it ne.. read more
If there was a prize for originality. This would get it.
The music just set the tone to the journey of love and discovery. I could say a thousand other things.
But it might devalue your masterpiece. Glad I came across you.

Posted 1 Month Ago


It's such a pleasure to see you still post online, Linda! As usual, your poetry is enchanting! The entire story of love, ostensibly the "love of a lifetime" is elucidated in such heart rending detail here, and the effect magnified so much by the music, it is quite hard to give any constructive criticism at this point. Let me just read this again to dwell in your mastery of this theme.

Posted 1 Month Ago


What a beautiful poem and music. So enchanting and out of this world. It is all done right with the right notes...:)...............

Posted 3 Months Ago



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Tags: Love, Shy, Sing, Fall, Fold, Soar, Bliss, Bloom, Reflect, Listen, Soft, Spill, Blush, Cling, Sweet

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Linda Marie Van Tassell

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Poetry has been my passion since I was about fifteen years old, and I love the structure of rhyme and meter moreso than just randomly throwing words upon a page without any form whatsoever. Whi.. more..

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