A Poem by liorvinci

Is it perfect, did I get it right?
Missing pieces, relatable feels.
Sweaty palms, panic, fright.
Heart jumps back, chest reels.

Incomplete, forever it will be,
blinded by the daunting fear.
No one’s work, is mastery,
others judge it, don’t you see?

Self improvement guide’s,
our next steps towards,
the best self versions,
as we move forward.

Waiting for approval,
justified by the few,
who never truly,
understand you.

They say less is more,
but there is more in less,
so how do you choose your words?
To not be left with regret!

My words are for the amateurs,
critics step aside,
together our words will flourish,
together we realize.

Get it out the door, they
say you only live once.
Continue writing more,
go on inspire on!

© 2017 liorvinci

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Wow this was a fun read. Certainly lives up to its name, it actually feels inspiring. Got me wanting to write more the moment I finished reading it, good job~

Posted 10 Months Ago

You give the reader a sense of feelings in the introduction of this work...and carry on from there...seems the inspiration develops as you read the end game...each their own on how they truly are inspired...Author, Glen Yumang Manese

Posted 10 Months Ago

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Added on November 18, 2017
Last Updated on November 18, 2017