A Love Letter

For Daniel

To my dearest love and keeper of my soul,

It's been another long day without you
I swear to you it's cruel
I wish that I could have spent my day with you
Instead of meandering about like a fool

Well, the sky was the same old blue
And the grass is forever green
But I'm tired of days without you
And I'm sick of this same old scene

Oh how Id love to spend my hours in your arms
Staring up at you as I lay on your chest
Id rather spend one day alive with you like this
Then a thousand alone like all the rest

So now, I'm writing you this letter
From much to far away
To ask you simply, if I may come home
And forever in your arms, stay.

Author's Note

Maybe Someday I'll get up the courage to show him this

Reviews

[jack seward -]

i like this. it's sweet, yeh. i like sweet. sweet like peaches.

! poem idea. congrats -- this poem inspired me to write another poem. that's some good poetry there, man.

[lauren emily]

This is a beautiful poem. The emotion in it is very nicely expressed.
Keep up the good work!
Lauren

[The Beatnik]

this was so cute. it makes me happy to think that love is not just a far-out idea but a warm reality. terrific write!

[Brandon]

Very Nicely done.

[He@ther!]

Aw!!!:) I loooved it!!:) Very very very romantic:) Its really sort of dream like. I mean, its exactly the kind of thing I dream about!!:)
L.O.V.E. it!!!:)

-Heaher

[.::Cup^E^Cake*RaWr!*::.]

Awwww *tear* I hope he knows how lucky he is to have someone to love him as much as u do! I'm sure he does! Waaaahhhhh I want a bf to love me!!!
Great Write!!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is really beautiful...

Id rather spend one day alive with you like this
Then a thousand alone like all the rest

I really loved these lines thought the whole thing was full of such tenderness.