Flesh Industrious

Flesh Industrious

A Poem by Davidgeo
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voiding morning

welcome to my pure folk lore

written antiquity


in American text fleshy filthy


from the gently

viewing way 

we see herds upon herds

of disbeilevers dying

and grazing

in false spirits

high spirits


in the vain of "Cherokee hair tampons"

land livers

failed modern humans

working vanity machines


a philosophy of health

it is not so dangerous to be alive

but if adventurous


put some clothes on


all climate attacker

with no hair on

built for nothings

ready for all emergencies


without clothes on sometimes


willing to fight in any sort of manner

through the most perilous of encounters

feed shame into the wind


given the fair chance

and some deep breaths


the air everywhere is like soil

every breath a drink of water

and the flora

then fauna

like our fertilizer


for the very reddest  

of our blood

to survive

into dried leftovers

the waking dead

(in no need of focus)

the unafraid

without clothes on

the meatloaf at the end of the rainbow

the tip of the peak

or maybe just another top of the morning


how do you do it?


i'm forgotten; tabula rasa

after today's repetition

and tonight one of many

deeply machinistic dreams

repetition


and s**t

i never remember

it's how i do it

© 2016 Davidgeo


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Reading this piece while listening to Loreena McKennitt's "The Gates of Istanbul" made for quite an interesting read. I love the first line of the second to last stanza. I read it as ending a day with how it began, repetition/routine, even though we have a fresh start each morning (we're wiped clean, basically). Every day feels like a rerun, even our dreams seem the same. I read the second line of the last stanza as referring to not remembering (or being able to recall) one's dreams or perhaps one's day-to-day living. Life does seem to run together after awhile. Lovely writing. Beautiful, as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nessly

7 Years Ago

It's awesome regardless.
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks doll face
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You're one of the better poets so it's kind of difficult too really give you something to chew on for criticism.

Great work my friend.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Reading this piece while listening to Loreena McKennitt's "The Gates of Istanbul" made for quite an interesting read. I love the first line of the second to last stanza. I read it as ending a day with how it began, repetition/routine, even though we have a fresh start each morning (we're wiped clean, basically). Every day feels like a rerun, even our dreams seem the same. I read the second line of the last stanza as referring to not remembering (or being able to recall) one's dreams or perhaps one's day-to-day living. Life does seem to run together after awhile. Lovely writing. Beautiful, as always.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nessly

7 Years Ago

It's awesome regardless.
Davidgeo

7 Years Ago

Thanks doll face
This comment has been deleted by the poster.

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