Quantum Tunneling

when you find out

you've been talking to

an assasin

before the tea stains

the hot water

when you find out

you've been talking

to yourself

before the milk

clouds the water

will you still enjoy your tea?

after you find out

who you've been talking too

in your sleep

before tea

Author's Note

Reviews

[hypochondrita]

This made me picture a really mind blowing type of movie where the protagonist is lead by anonymous clues and starts to really connect with the person behind them only so in the end the big twist would reveal the notes were being left by her own dissociated second personality. Anyways.. nice poem

[Davidgeo]

Ever see a movie called "Memento"?

[hypochondrita]

I have indeed. How did I not make the connection? Lol.. well guess that means my supposed original movie idea was just an unconscious illusion

[Davidgeo]

Quantum Leap staring Scot Bakula and Dean Stockwell

[RibhyMay]

The anonymity of his piece is so sinister! LOVE IT.

[OhSnapShley]

Its different then what im use to seeing I guess so maybe thats why I dont really get it..

[Bhumika Rao]

it has a vague sinister feel to it....and also you haven't tried explaining it just leaving it to readers' interpretations. nice!!!

[ManasaC]

The beauty of this poem is in it's vagueness. I did enjoy reading it. I am not entirely sure about what the poem is trying to convey but that is what makes the poem stand out. Good Job!

[Davidgeo]

What makes it stand out is that it makes no sense to you? That makes no sense.

[KWP]

I always enjoy my tea ... I spoken to a lot of weirdo a*s types i my time, but none have yet to make me not enjoy my tea ... yup X

[Davidgeo]

This was about self reflection, not other weirdo a*s types. Yup.

[KWP]

Yup ... most tea drinkers are weird asses ... just the way the planet rolls ...

[Davidgeo]

ha... yeah, it seems to be how it goes.

[Sikandar Khan]

Poem Good To Read

[Davidgeo]

to you thanks for read

[Sikandar Khan]

Welcome....

[Davidgeo]

I was mocking you.

[Sikandar Khan]

okk.........