Repetition

"a perfect state"
where none are commanded to be selfless
nor compelled to be selfish
full of minds built on reason
within unperfected scenarios
without labeling vocabulary
no good vs evil
just alpha and omega
some birth and some death
a brother or sister
the stick or the hole
the mother the father
more birth and more death
living life as we should
no such word as perfect
or flawed
never defering satisfaction
nothing sacrificed for fairy tail kingdoms
completely beyond all cruel master morality
beyond the esoteric slavery of all pious tom-foolery
existing in a perfect state of variety
where everyone's experimenting
knowing everything's experience
experiancing ourselves and each other
subjectively
living like time is a flat circle
one great big eternal return
which can be hell's repetition
or even better repetition's of heaven
you must only live now as if you'll always comeback
"unstuck in time"

Reviews

[Unoriginaly Original]

The slight curve in tone and emotion in this piece only brings out the humanity in all your words. Nice.
Grammar though.

[Ana B.]

I read this under my all time favorite - Rachmaninoff's piano concert no2 (i'll post it on your profile.) It fit. Slightly different from your usual writes. I really hope there will be no abortion of this one. Lovely.

[Davidgeo]

No, this one stays. I think it's good enough to stick around. I'm glad you like it, thanks. You're kind of a music snob aren't ya?

[Ana B.]

Perhaps. I just think if there is magic in this world, it's music...among other things. Besides, classical music is awesome...and blues...and jazz..ans rock... well you got the point i'm sure. :)

[Davidgeo]

Are you a fan of Robert Johnson?

[Ana B.]

YES! '' I've got a hellhound on my trail'' is the song that will be playing at my funeral.

[Davidgeo]

You reflect credit upon your people.

[Ana B.]

if life is a race why wouldn't the afterlife be it too?

[Davidgeo]

there is not an afterlife... think of life as if were a kind of flip book and time is like your hands flipping the tiny individual pages to make a picture out of the entirety of the book. You can flip the pages slower or faster but you can't really progress them out of order. Have you ever heard of a book called "Slaughterhouse 5" by Kurt Vonnegut? He does a better job of explaining this.

[Ana B.]

hmmm....i see your point and yes I've heard of this book, yet i didn't read it.

[Davidgeo]

It's quite wonderful. You should read it. Ethan Hawke does a nice audible version of it. I listen to it in my car sometimes.

[Ana B.]

huh, Ethan Hawke keeps surprising me. You watched the movie Daybreakers? cool one....well after Gattaca maybe

[Davidgeo]

I like Ethan Hawke in a lot of things. Training Day, of course. A sappy Dickinson adaptation of Great Expectations... but his best movie in my opinion is a little known flick he did with Uma Thurman way back in the day called Tape. Watch Tape if you have not... you will be very surprised.

[Ana B.]

hmmm, I actually never heard of Tape. Thanks. You're the movie-pedia.

[Davidgeo]

Oh you're gonna love Tape... that's a very unique movie. It's an early Richard Linklater movie.

[Davidgeo]

Same year as Waking Life but after Dazed and Confused

[Ana B.]

haha, you're a movie nerd. Though i've seen these two. Linklater's suff is....''diacritic''.I haven't seen many movies of his, but I like it. Though the movie ''Boyhood'' is pretty long.too long. Yet the ''Before'' trilogy is nice.

[Davidgeo]

I didn't really care for Boyhood so much. It was fine. Watch Tape.

[BBP]

This was a beautiful write (kind of shocked lol) it as very soft and hopeful. It really did painy a picture of a perfect world and the thought of life as an endless circle.. Always able to return is a hopeful wish everyone secretly wishes for

[Davidgeo]

I liked it. It's a good thing t write with hopeful tone from time to time even if you're kind of an a*****e.

[BBP]

yeah, back atcha shithead! ;)

[Davidgeo]

cunty b***h.