Entropy 2

Entropy 2

A Poem by DDave
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The prize divides us

The loss perverts them

The win distorts us

Yet the world remains

The ends will shift

We all change places

The prize dissolves

The thing that made us

  Will always kill us

The cosmos rolls

 Order will fall

We always will lose

It all must come apart

    That is nature, welcome to it

          "Things fall apart; the centre cannot hold"
     ---- thank you, Mr Billy B Yeats


© 2017 DDave



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well, hell, now I'm depressed.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DDave

11 Months Ago

If there was no ending how could we possible enjoy the beginning and the middle? Don't be depressed.. read more
A cosmic truth, an inevitability stated powerfully, with no flounces, no frills, driving home the despair of of it all.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DDave

11 Months Ago

You're too nice to me.
DIVYA

11 Months Ago

I'll try to bad to you in my next review :)
It must all come apart - and yes that is the nature of it - I have thought about this very fact a lot - a lot - we live in a finite world in a finite universe - and we still fight and struggle - what for? What for? Consciousness has separated us from the everywhen - we have given ourselves a touch of importance - I exist - see me - feel me - I'm here - but in the big scheme of things we forget to be in the here and now - for eternity does not stand still - and we have also lost the skill of being still within it ...

yeah - food for thought - nice one you X

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

DDave

11 Months Ago

I really do enjoy how we come to similar conclusions with extremely different outlooks. That's kin.. read more
KWP

11 Months Ago

I hear ya big dawg!

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