ANTO...  You Have Changed Me... (making me attack your worst tendencies)

ANTO... You Have Changed Me... (making me attack your worst tendencies)

A Poem by Dead Alive Dave
"

My mistake, it never isn't. Tony fuggin' Jordan ya creepy stalker. Stop creeping on chicks man, just write. Imagine how good you could be if you didn't waste your time being creepy as all get out?

"

The glitch in the system

When you find it

Then you become someone

In the system. . .

You become that

Within the system

(you will be found)

You can cheat

   And then

(I do find you)

   broken

in the end

          always broken

like me, but in a different way

The Chase ensues

You always lose

Idiot

(on repeat)


ugh...



   re assemble

For the chase

   again 

Until the "end"

(you f*****g psychopath) 

    never stop

I am nothing without you

  I will never understand a fair world. . .

(Just,

Like,

You)

     but in reverse

 

               we are the same

                  if you'd only tell the truth

     we would be brothers

   perhaps even the one's to break the circle's

(I can dream can't I?)


Basically written by...  Anthony (ANTO) Mccrory/Tony Jordan; of Belfast and one helluva fucked up life 




© 2017 Dead Alive Dave



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Ballbag - conjecture queen - bun head freako

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 4 people found this review constructive.

Oh! Someone finally belled the cat! So I must do my bit by standing up and waving out. Writer's Cafe shudders in anticipation of large scale nuclear fallout. An intriguing, compelling read, high on the comic quotient. Really enjoyed Dave.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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2 Weeks Ago

You're an idiot Silente. Go pretend to be something you clearly are not elsewhere ya fucktarded hy.. read more

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Dead Alive Dave
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Nassau, New Providence, Bahamas



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