In Your Own Way (inventing existence)

In Your Own Way (inventing existence)

A Poem by Davidgeo
"

. keeping time is existence

"

Time fled accross existence
And I followed. . . without exception

I felt compelled
An experience I know to be universal
Amongst us
So,
I know you do it too
Saturating your own perceptions
With you
Shared in a common time
From an inward point of view
Different but in the same time
As me
So, I'm certain you understand
In your own way
From your own place
Hunting your own sights
Taking your own view
At different speeds
Across existence
Chasing after the same time
(Inventing shared existence)
In your own way
In this moment
We may understand the other
If only briefly, a fleeting moment
Perhaps our last
As we knew it
Until the next one
Until the next time. . .
So as I know it
We all share in something
In our own way
(it's always time)
We understand

(relatively the same)

© 2017 Davidgeo


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If time is the only common factor, it would be virtually impossible to understand one another, our perceptions so crippled by our earthly senses ( it feels a bit unnerving if I think physical time is the only thing we share) Yet there's something called timing, which if happens right, may find us on the same wavelength, as you say, "In this moment
We may understand the other
If only briefly, a fleeting moment"

A fleeting moment of connecting in time is enough for the human experience.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

In the physical world, the speed of light is the only common or constant factor. The fact that noth.. read more
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

Now I feel stupid too :)
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's all good. I actually am stupid.



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If time is the only common factor, it would be virtually impossible to understand one another, our perceptions so crippled by our earthly senses ( it feels a bit unnerving if I think physical time is the only thing we share) Yet there's something called timing, which if happens right, may find us on the same wavelength, as you say, "In this moment
We may understand the other
If only briefly, a fleeting moment"

A fleeting moment of connecting in time is enough for the human experience.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

In the physical world, the speed of light is the only common or constant factor. The fact that noth.. read more
DIVYA

6 Years Ago

Now I feel stupid too :)
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's all good. I actually am stupid.

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Johnsburg, IL



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