She Wishes

try not to regret the last one

regret the first time;
she wishes he had said something akin to. . .

"ask me about my huge c**k and inability to maintain meaningful relationships"

beforehand, by all means 

if only to quicken an education
on the way to a perfection

sans the herpes
the f*****g abandonment complex
on the way to "A" perfection

one
last
time
(again?)

sans the pain

the inabilities
with the happiest of endings

everything that you wished for

   (this was only what you settled for)

 

regret

   (most did come from it)

with hope

    the only remedy

online dating is totally a good idea

  --- jackasses

Reviews

[R.E. Ray]

I think the last two lines say it all! Your other words and the somewhat chaotic structure complement the end. I've been married since well before the online dating thing, and I'm grateful I didn't experience it. "Try not to regret the last one" might have also been a good title.

[Davidgeo]

I kinda like regretting them, especially the next one. Ha...

If you ever come across an annoyingly stable married couple tell them this joke: "I know why your relationship is so stable... because that's were you met".

That one always gets a laugh. Don't say it in front of actual hideous looking people though... it's not really that funny when used maliciously.

[Nipplegrinder]

I get it. You can't have a healthy relationship. Sorry, TK

[Davidgeo]

Actually, I don't think you got this one. You're right though, I can't have healthy relationships. But that is covered quite well in other poems.... this is about something a little different.

[Falcon1]

You can do so much bullshitting on line and never catch a deceases so spread the word.

[fireangelpoet]

Lol, I was humored, and yes online dating is foolish to me, now to just chat with people sometimes is okay,I mean clean chat, but trying to find love on a computer umph! Very good poem!

[Cherrie Palmer]

You kind a got a sneak up on this one lol

[Davidgeo]

It kinda sucks.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Regret.. with hope...a most powerful and real emotion

[‘Thoughts In Time..]

Lol...what should I say, each to thier own, true in many senses but then again choices are ours to make, not my cup of tea online dating but whatever floats your boat- 🌹

[Davidgeo]

This was a weird one. I don't even know what to say about it.

[‘Thoughts In Time’🌹]

Lol, weird is always best😛

[wordman]

sounded like a great conversation

[Davidgeo]

It was indeed. I'm glad we could have that talk.

[wordman]

yeah,me to

[Davidgeo]

Ha. Ron, you're a card. I actually didn't mean to send an RR to you for this one... it was another poem i just put out called "hungry" i wanted you to read. Check it out and let m know what you think.

[wordman]

o k i will