Completely Uninspired

Completely Uninspired

A Poem by Davidgeo
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when aquired superficially
after a lifetime's worth of effort
what is left upon your summit
will always be wholly artificial

© 2018 Davidgeo


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A message we could all life by. If you set your goals based what image that will give you then you will never be satisfied in the end. You need to have passion for anything you spend your time doing otherwise you will look back at the battles of your life and wonder if everything was worth it. Fail for a reason, don't succeed for nothing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I like how you ended that... gave me a good chuckle.

I also think you understood the.. read more



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A message we could all life by. If you set your goals based what image that will give you then you will never be satisfied in the end. You need to have passion for anything you spend your time doing otherwise you will look back at the battles of your life and wonder if everything was worth it. Fail for a reason, don't succeed for nothing.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I like how you ended that... gave me a good chuckle.

I also think you understood the.. read more
it sure to hell wouldn`t surprise me,life is kind of a joke

Posted 6 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's about people like you. Fakers. Frauds. Pathetic liars so devoid of self esteem that they wou.. read more
 wordman

5 Years Ago

well troll i told you 3 years ago to go get fucked and i`m telling you now,you do real well scaring .. read more
Dang. I really hope I don’t feel the sting of this a lifetime from now... that would suck. As always, in just a few short words, well said.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

H L Rose

6 Years Ago

True, I guess I’ll just have to try and keep it minimal. Literally. Strive to acquire minimal.
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

It's never going to be that simple. Just strive be as you are naturally, minimalistic or not that i.. read more
H L Rose

6 Years Ago

Good point. It’s not that simple.
Perhaps I should strive to make every effort effective i.. read more

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Added on February 23, 2018
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Johnsburg, IL



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