Annie Bonny

. apologies, not very good at writing tonight. but I swear there's a good idea in here somewhere .

you do or you do not
meet the standard

fulfill your mission

     pull your weight

sans respect or expectation

   things will happen regardless

but how exactly...

do you feel about a lost war?

brought on by false men...

            (we)

   what does that mean to you?

will you feel yourself to be...
            my love surviving failure

making tough decisions
or my love who failed to be successful in one severly untenable

             situation 
(the only difference is attitude)

             and intelligent decision making

(in war)

everyone loses

                        (can you lose better?)

so f**k the world,

    s**t might just have to suck tonight

full of fake ideals

         and idiotic s**t to die for

stupidly

       and singular

        ugh...

so let us,

           f**k the world today

and then  do it better tomorrow

       with more refinement 

   to our rules of engagement

some entanglements are precious

 while others are straight idiotic

   my love belongs to the annie bonny  

             now and forever, 

for reasons unparticular 

Author's Note

Reviews

[DIVYA]

Reads like quite a complicated love story. Annie bonny was a pirate so that implies unconventional love choices. The rules of the game keep changing and what failed yesterday may work today. So if its worth it, give it another try. I might be way off mark, I'm afraid.

[Davidgeo]

When I get to high I tend to write about pirates.

That s**t barely makes any sense even to me.

[Nipplegrinder]

Needs some development. This should be something you revisit. I kinda like your drunk headspace, here.

[Davidgeo]

If you ever see me using parentheses a lot assume it's a training piece.

I have a few concepts I'm trying to work out, submitting them in fragments as I do sometimes keeps me honest... forces me to try harder even in practice, even using half baked ideas. It keeps me from getting too lazy if I know that even one person other than me is reading it.

Also... my headspace is never drunk, especially when I've been drinking.

[Nipplegrinder]

I avoid writing poetry when I'm drunk. Especially after drinking.

[Davidgeo]

Ha... we all think differently while trying for the same thing. Ah, I wouldn't have it any other way. No sir I would not.

[Davidgeo]

Do you smoke weed at all?

[Davidgeo]

(you can absolutely ignore that question and would think no less of you)

[Falcon1]

Love at all cost can save this world.

[Davidgeo]

People should do more drugs for a living.

[Cherrie Palmer]

Aye, mate jib the sail
Ya old pirate you.

[Davidgeo]

pipe down ye scallywag!