Dreaming in Dust Weight

I come from a dream of tightly packed dust

Circling an effervescent inferno of viciousness

From a distance so gently, she warms us

Into something fantastically strange

Among mountains and oceans

Blue skies and luscious jungles

Clever tigers and silly rodents

Super humans and lowly servants

In between everything and all of that

For this ephemeral moment

I live on a dream of tightly packed dust

(And it's f*****g spectacular)

Author's Note

Reviews

[guy drori]

What you added at the end in brackets made me smile, and I liked the last line, where you wrote "I live on a dream of tightly packed dust."

[Davidgeo]

Thanks mang...

[Nipplegrinder]

This is well done. Effervescent?

[Davidgeo]

That's one of my favorite words. I even know how to spell it without spellcheck (I'm not joking, I'm actually proud of that...(my standards are super low))

[Davidgeo]

Here's a way better version of this.... (I am a plagiarist if I steal from myself? Or am I just shamelessly unoriginal?)

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/listofdemands/1729560/

[J.L.Q.]

The earth :) home :) I love this poem!

[Cherrie Palmer]

Very fluid and a life. I like this, pure poetry.