Hypocrisy Righteous

I understand what I am... do you?

ya f*****g monster

stop being honest

shut the f**k up

and f*****g fawn over me

dearly. . .

it's why i do this

don't you know that?

do not betray me

you will obey me

and inflate my confidence

or i will hate you

and start a witch-hunt

to f*****g shame you

into f*****g exile

you will obey me

don't f*****g make me...

report you fully 

to black list you roundly

i'll f****n' do it!

i need no reason

other than my dear feelings

your rights mean nothing

in comparison

you're the f*****g monster

so says my feelings

and that's all that matters

because you're the monster

you will obey me

or I will destroy you

because you're the 'monster'

and I am 'righteous'

Author's Note

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Inner turmoil, the never ending battle that some may suffer through mental illness. Of course I may be off the mark here, because poetry is subjective and the writer may have something else in mind. Anyway, it is a powerful read and can also be read on different levels.

[Davidgeo]

Your interpretation seems just fine to me. But it's more about weak minded people who only want to be praised and take any and all forms of criticism to be personal attacks and/or "bullying" while either appealing to a higher authority with demands to punish said critic or embarking on a public moral shaming campaign in hopes of embarrassing said critic into silence. While I think we are all guilty of taking criticism the wrong way from time to time some people take the next step; attempting to silence anyone critical of their work in a vindictive way while hiding behind spurious moral principles. His name is Ji-Suk and if you don't say positive things he will report you.

[Nipplegrinder]

Some folks just can't handle the truth.

[TerryDarcy-Ryan akaSh..]

We are all monsters and if any of us is not yet a monster there is time..... I was intent on the conversation of the main event when I became confused to the meaning of love and loyalty such as extortion brings one some fine companions but a few kind words sir ....you will feel better around the loyalties. Nice work again. Thank You for sharing

Sheer Terror

[Wild Rose]

Could be my sisters husband
He is always right and knows best
Has to be obeyed
Came unstuck here

[Davidgeo]

Sounds like he has a case of narcissistic personality disorder or what's worse, maybe a case of borderline personality disorder. Whenever you hear him being a dickhole tell him "people in glass houses shouldn't throw stones"... that always pisses them off right away. It's kinda funny actually. I'm a little narcissistic myself but I'm pretty self aware of that s****y trait so it's not usually a long term problem. I just end up apologizing to people more than a normal person would have to.

[Wild Rose]

we will never see them again > they moved to NZ
His family have disowned him

Just feel sorry for sis > She chose him

[Davidgeo]

That's unfortunate.

[KWP]

again - nicely articulated

I will not generally obey anyone though ;) that's just the way I roll baby :D

[Davidgeo]

That's a good way to roll doll face.

[KWP]

Thanks doll face X