Objective Children of Things Subjective

Objective Children of Things Subjective

A Poem by Davidgeo
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when arranged sensibly letters make words
essentially that is expression
when observed honestly life can be messy
objectively that is subjective
when applied properly drugs are corrective
likely that is deflective
when raised effectively kids are the future
collectively this is our purpose

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Deeply hypnotically expressive and draw you in deeper and deeper. Like a spider to its web. And truly makes you THINK. David to me this is the best by part I have read of yours.


Posted 5 Years Ago


This is clever. You show a great deal of hope in these words. Surprising, from such a cynical man.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Clever use of language, and your final two lines I totally concur with.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The opening line reminds me of the old magnet letter boards kids play with. I like the creative use of words in line 4.
I'm not sure which hat you have on for this thought rendering, future tending poem but, I love it.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cherrie Palmer

5 Years Ago

I think people hide behind the freedoms of poetry and forget to hold to the creative elements of it... read more
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Yeah, I think know what you mean. There's a few people here that I'm convinced just copy and past t.. read more
Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

I'm using a different computer with a small keyboard today... sorry about all those typos in that la.. read more
Short, sweet, and coated in silver, your words are well placed. Great job! Keep on writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Not a lot of people use the phrase "coated in silver" to mean well articulated. Great job yourself.
Clever use of our language; and I am entirely in concert with the sentiment in the last two lines.

Beccy.



Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Thanks beccy. I wrote this a long while ago. So long I kinda forgot what the connection between the.. read more

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Added on April 26, 2018
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