Awakened Dreaming

look up to the stars and you will dream
of all the greatest things far beyond you
look into your heart and you will awaken
to the truest truths that lie within you

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nipplegrinder]

Your good side is showing again.

[Davidgeo]

Thanks. Most people on this site don't think I have one of those.

It's just not quite as fun as the other part though.

[Richard McLin]

You are really good at the short but meaningful poetry. Keep it up.
-Richard

[Davidgeo]

Thanks Dick... I will try to keep it that up.

[Abraham Kureshi]

true enough, nice write !

[Ms Paragon]

Short but to the point.Thanks for reminding us of what's important!

[Wild Rose]

My pictures show me where we have been and our families
Beyond that is out of reach

Our hearts go together wherever to future takes us
We try to steer it to go the way we wish

[KWP]

I think Cherrie is flirting with you ;)

your words are a great reminder that choose t live my life this way ... forgotten it recently having gotten a stupid all consuming job and all ... bah !!!!

Happy days

[Davidgeo]

The fonz would agree with you about the happy days.

I assume everyone's flirting with me. Even the dudes.

[KWP]

lucky from all endz ...

[KWP]

love the fonz ..... is everyone flirting with me too - geez I hope so :D

[Davidgeo]

I flirt with you sometimes. You never send me naked pictures of yourself though, it's very frustrating.

[KWP]

sending naked pics is so ten years ago ... i’d prefer an exhaustive hike ... or some such new experience ;)

[Cherrie Palmer]

Smooth and satisfying you make the reader look outwardly then you have us take that energy and look inward.
I look forward for another.

[Cherrie Palmer]

PS love the new hat

[Davidgeo]

Smooth and satisfying is always a good time. Thanks for the compliments and stuff.

[John the Baptist]

A brief poem, but quite profound. We must keep attuned to the great without, to realize its potential. But keeping attuned to the great within is even more essential, for there alone will we find what we are seeking. Good work.

[Davidgeo]

That's about exactly how I feel about it.

Thanks for reading John.