Reinvention

Reinvention

A Poem by Davidgeo
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Caught in an old trap
For too long
Down the wrong path
It becomes time . . .

To change to adapt
To heal to evolve

To estrange the old ways
To grow and to flourish

To reinvent yourself
Down a better path
To find in yourself 
A better person
To leave this world
A better place
Reinvented

© 2018 Davidgeo


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Davidgeo

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Love Elvis. He is still King in my books. Now what's this here? Thought this sounded a bit like a confessional till I got half way down and then it appears in the final stanza to go down a different path altogether. Your words "To reinvent you", no mention of the word "me" there. And then I glance and see the author's notes. Are you really turning over a new leaf? Have you been having lessons? If so, I've got me duster ready to buff up your halo.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Elvis certainly is terrific.



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...To estrange the old ways...
What a great way to turn a phrase.
It is to easy to get trapped in a loop.

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yes indeed. Every chance I get I should be the chameleon or maybe stronger like a super power.
Your words are strong a very wise write.

Sheer Terror

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Love Elvis. He is still King in my books. Now what's this here? Thought this sounded a bit like a confessional till I got half way down and then it appears in the final stanza to go down a different path altogether. Your words "To reinvent you", no mention of the word "me" there. And then I glance and see the author's notes. Are you really turning over a new leaf? Have you been having lessons? If so, I've got me duster ready to buff up your halo.

Chris

Posted 5 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Davidgeo

5 Years Ago

Elvis certainly is terrific.

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Johnsburg, IL



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