Remember to Forget

Remember to Forget

A Poem by David george
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sometimes that's best

"

life's a b***h when it hurts to exist

she said. . .

"he got more than just her sink wet"

and on our free will. . .


there is a life of certainty

at the cost of serendipity


a cost that's

    too much but not enough to love


and so you and i live here

whole and all broken

dissolving in the same place

into very dear pieces


that maybe won't always


inside our own dear world


make any sense in the same place


enough to see the world

true and full

beyond the things we are

before we ever came



© 2019 David george



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David george

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I felt the sex almost immediately - then I felt a shift - but then I am not a surface dweller - the last stanza speaks all the volumes to me - then I skip back to the second stanza and interpret that in my own way - my personality is not one to accept a life of certainty - I am still trying to understand why that is - certainty though can be put into a mould of conditioning in its own right - what is 'acceptable' in society and what is not. If we can slide our way into serendipity though - well then why the heck not?

I read a quite just this morning ...

“Just be you. I’ll be me. And we’ll meet somewhere in the middle.” this resonated with your forth stanza - I like that ...

anyway you - nice to see you (or not) take care X

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

2 Weeks Ago

Yeah all of the above ... and the point ?
David george

2 Weeks Ago

There is no point. That's kinda the point.
KWP

2 Weeks Ago

thank goodness for that ...



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I felt the sex almost immediately - then I felt a shift - but then I am not a surface dweller - the last stanza speaks all the volumes to me - then I skip back to the second stanza and interpret that in my own way - my personality is not one to accept a life of certainty - I am still trying to understand why that is - certainty though can be put into a mould of conditioning in its own right - what is 'acceptable' in society and what is not. If we can slide our way into serendipity though - well then why the heck not?

I read a quite just this morning ...

“Just be you. I’ll be me. And we’ll meet somewhere in the middle.” this resonated with your forth stanza - I like that ...

anyway you - nice to see you (or not) take care X

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KWP

2 Weeks Ago

Yeah all of the above ... and the point ?
David george

2 Weeks Ago

There is no point. That's kinda the point.
KWP

2 Weeks Ago

thank goodness for that ...
I read the title the wrong way at first I think.
It takes on a whole new meaning.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

David george

2 Weeks Ago

Ha... don't feel too bad, I purposely worded this piece for that reason.

It's suppos.. read more
Ana Papaya

2 Weeks Ago

Didn't feel like a sex poem. Interesting. :)
David george

2 Weeks Ago

What was the initial meaning you took from it? (there's a few meanings I layered in there but, I do.. read more

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Added on May 3, 2019
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