Hallelujah-4

Hallelujah-4

A Poem by indu
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inspired by the Jeff Buckley track titled "Hallelujah" while trying to enter a poetry contest =]

"
The cries are
high
But how much is heard?

© 2010 indu



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indu
criticism is welcomed

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ok..i seriously agree with you..i made a big blunder!



Posted 7 Years Ago


My first thought was that a haiku consists of 17 syllables in three lines (5 - 7 - 5).

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on May 27, 2010
Last Updated on May 28, 2010
Tags: God, Lord, Prayer

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indu
indu

Cochin, India



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I have always felt the urge to write.. but I am uncertain about the texture, technics etc. (if there are any). I have written poems much more than prose though I am not a big fan of poems.. Fact i.. more..

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