The Invaders

Trying to take me over.

Descending

One by one                             

Building force

They abound

Surround

Gaining speed

Ready to crush

Raining down

They want to win

Taking me over

Hovering lower

Trapped

Battle weighted

Stuck and struck

 

Game over

About face

Game on

Picking them off

One by one

Reducing to few

Distance expands

Advantage in mind

Space widens

No longer pursued

Mastery is mine.

 

 

Little Mouse

July 26, 2007

Reviews

[Celtic Cat]

Damn it, WC just ate my review!!!
Anyhoo..... This is great!! When I used to play, they were all only grey. : ) And, you make me feel better about writing a poem about Pacman, too!! : )
I felt like I was in the poem, or on the screen, and during that first game, it was a little claustrophobic in here.... thank God you won the next round!!! Yay!

[*^*my*beautiful*zelda*l..]

YEAH!!!!!! I REALLY loved that mostly because I love video games and all that. Plus, it reminds me of those who have tried to take down my spirit in school. 'Course, you already know what they did to me. Anyway, the flow could have been better, but i still really enjoyed this one! ^_^ Oh wait, it's spoken word... ok, never mind, the flow doesn't need any revising! :P Hehe, when I read this poem, I couldn't help but smile; video games make me happy! ^_^

[M Lamont]

Love it! Nice nod to video games but get the meaning how it applies to life. Like that there is a lesson learned at the begining and that is used for the second part to be a winner. Great positive tone!