Beauty unattended

Beauty unattended

A Poem by Tom W.
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For the young ladies who despair finding love ... a friend said he could hear grinderman singing this to the tune of "electric alice "

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The young foolish men walk past, as beauty remains unattended.

Morons who seek only a magazines glossy look; beauty should be offended.

From electric rooms old men send pictures of their lost youth.

Hoping beauty will forgive it and did not herself bend the truth.

Beauty sits with a lonesome broken heart; she feels shall never be mended.

The young foolish men walk past, as beauty remains unattended

© 2010 Tom W.


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"The young foolish men..."
Amen. 100/100
But I'll continue reading and give you a decent review:

I love this. According to your description, it was written for me and I'm glad. I'm especially fond of the last two lines. This is such a sad and beautiful (there goes that word again) piece. Thank you for posting it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"The young foolish men..."
Amen. 100/100
But I'll continue reading and give you a decent review:

I love this. According to your description, it was written for me and I'm glad. I'm especially fond of the last two lines. This is such a sad and beautiful (there goes that word again) piece. Thank you for posting it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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