Hell's Crossroad

Two best friends fight

On the war's battlefield

Never losing each other's sight

To help another, they would yield

One day their luck ran out

From the sides bullets flew

One began to scream and shout

And the other got hit too

One nurse heard their cry

To the site she began running

Unable to let out a sigh

For the shock that was coming

Looking from face to face

One was her beloved brother

Wishing this wasn't the case

The best friend was her lover

The two of them she must save

But no time to help them both

Save Brother? for all he gave?

Or Lover? who held love's oath?

Their painful cries she cannot take

As she kneels down in between 

With both their lives at stake

She cannot bare the scene

So with tears in her eyes

She turns her back on one

Seeking forgiveness from the skies

For what she had just done

Reviews

[JENY]

A very nice poem…..
I wonder who will be the “One” she turned her back on…..
You left us readers curious…..

[Rhine Wolf]

WOW!!! i loved the pace of it, it kept me wanting for more and the ending was ... well .... the only out come that i could see!!

Blessed be,
Fallon

[darkgurl]

I thought this write was just plain simply amazing. You write with heart and soul and I can feel the emotion. This is a wonderful write.

[Chilson, Joshua]

I really enjoyed this write, though I must say it's not for the reader to choose, only inside whom wrote it would know from emotion. Anyway, keep up the work :)

[livelovewrite]

you can't just let us decide for ourselves! that's evil!

[Punk rocker]

Oh that is so sad

[Livenrite]

You pick who she chose!! Honestly? I don't know who she chose...reflected upon my feeling of confusion when writing this piece;)

[azlamalo]

whod she pick whod she pick?!