Deep within.

Deep within.

A Poem by Living Proof.
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Sorry it's short...

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Like a bird,

Trying to find it's home.

Somewhere to be comfortable on their very own.

Searching everywhere,

To try to find who you are.

When, really,

You don't need to search too far.

It lies deep within your heart.

© 2009 Living Proof.


Author's Note

Living Proof.
This is pretty old; I wrote it in March, I think.
Anyways, enjoy.

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Short & sweet, i like it. Though to me it sounds a bit rocky and seems like it's missing commas. Nice write though. (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Sometimes short makes the point much more clear... : >) I like this one very much! Keep up the Great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


The message in this poem is so true. Good job! Even short poems can get their message across, even if it happens to be two lines!

Jared Hughes

Posted 14 Years Ago



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