Last Poem Of 2014

Heart felt the wreckage

of the knowledge

in disguise from the serpent

365 days of pure battle

The Good Vs The Evil

And another 365 days

Of us striving to differ

The Real from the Fantasy

Many people we have met

Many foods we have tasted

Many fights we had

For Us

From the Ize of the world

To the First impressions of earth

Another year has pass

Lonely and solitary

In the Solar System

Childs to criticize

Friends to love

Wifes and husbends to love

The world to love

The constant fights between

Sorrow and happiness 

But when sorrow wins

You live your life

Hoping that the sorrow will leave

Another year of hope

Heartbreakes

Sorrow

Happiness

Another year of wondering about Life

The poems and stories we made

Through the year

Has gotten to the many hearts of the writers

In here

It only takes time 

For love

To knock on your door

The cities you walked in

The people who you talked with

The people who you fighted with

Another 365 days of living our life

365 to go

The many bad moments we had

How we handle defeat

The fall downs we had

The Devil trying to lure us to evil

With a Big smiley face 

365 days of waking up in the morning

And been thankful for another day of living

Waking up from the fantasy

And living reality

Dreamers Fulfilling their dreams

With the big heart of theirs

The search for life in the universe

The search to know who you are

From our mistakes

We learned

From our falldowns

We got up stronger

What A year it has been

Everyone

Have a Happy new year with the family

I'm telling you this

From El Salvador

The little country

But with a big heart

Have a happy new year everyone

Enjoy eating and being happy

Today it is not acceptable being Sad

The season Was made for us to be happy

So what do you say?

Wanna go in another Ride for 365 days?

Reviews

[Confuser]

I loved it! Wow, so sweet, it as if you, if read, could put a smile on everyone's face in here! You did mine! Trying to find ourself, it is a journey for balance I suppose and your encouragement to stay away from sorry, we are only feeding the evil in the world. And you have pulled me into thinking about the past year; you are young, have fun! It passes so quickly. And you speaking for your country, El Salvador, the little country But with a big heart is so beautiful and touching. And yes, I pray, ready for another 365 days. Thanks so much. Big Smile!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much! I really appreciete it :)

[Confuser]

Y/W.......loved it. Clever.

[sweetvalorie]

Packed with a lot of truth and I found myself inwardly reflecting as I read it. Emotional. Great work.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much !

[Cool Girl]

I'd love to go on a 365 day ride XD
I love this poem and I love the feeling and emotion you put into it!
Great job!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much and happy 2015!

[Cool Girl]

You're welcome and thanks!

[Rita L. Sev]

:) I'm game for the ride! A whimsical poem that brings a smile. Happy 2015, Lizardo!

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Rita! To you too happy 2015!

[Don't just B, but B ama..]

Hello my friend Heber in California is from El Salvador, HAPPY NEW YEAR to you, your family, and friends. Wonderfully written poem, thank you.

[Lizardo]

Oh wow that is so nice ! Thank you so much and many blessings to you too!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, i do...another ride...

i like this piece...little country's with big heart....that is what it is all about, heart. because happiness and sorrow will always battle...that will never cease.

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Jacbo, Happy new year and best wishes to you!

[DoormanDan]

This is a great poem to end the year with! Lizardo, you have accurately described the good and bad things everyone in the world goes through. Colr me impressed! Happy new year from Delaware! :) :) :) :)

[Lizardo]

Thank you so much Dan, And have a happy new year Friend :)

[ANTO]

Lizardo this is not a poem this is the WC charter for the whole of next year !!
Im blooming well impressed my friend.
God Bless you
Happy New Year from Ireland

[Lizardo]

Jajaja thank you ANTO my friend, God bless you too and have a happy new year!