Teardrops

Teardrops

A Poem by Lizardo
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Teardrops falling from a leaf

Sunlight shining above the tree

Morning light that lights the sky

Where ideas come to life

 

Teardrops falling from a roof

Soothing sound of the rain hitting the ground

A depressive view of life is born

But a vital dream is gone

 

Teardrops falling from the sky

It rains wildly with lies

A little boy stands in the front door of his house

Waiting for his mommy to return home in time

 

Teardrops falling from the earth

It trembles and moves with death

Animals roaming around earth

Waiting patiently for their death

 

Teardrops falling from sky

Its another twisted day with lies

But I've learned how to come out of it

Without crying at night


© 2015 Lizardo



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love the poem,
keep writing!
looking forward to reading more :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Amy R

2 Years Ago

no need, u deserved it!
I really enjoyed this poem good job :)
Keep on writing!
I really like how you captured nature and the sadness.

Posted 2 Years Ago


This was a very good poem. I enjoyed this one a lot and really understood the meaning. I think you are a good writer. :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


i always enjoy your poems but this was even better. good job :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much Dante, I really appreciate it :)
Well written and wonderfully expressive. Loved the word choice and adored the phasing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!
Sad but well written and expressed. I liked this!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
One of my new favorites of yours!
Well done!
Keep on writing!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Emily

2 Years Ago

Your welcome!
Depression is hard to overcome, especially without help. I loved every line.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much creator!
Creator

2 Years Ago

You're welcome. Check my profile there's something you might want to read.
Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Okay I will
beautifully expressed..
thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Powerful and emotional ride in your words.
"Teardrops falling from sky
Its another twisted day with lies
But I've learned how to come out of it
Without crying at night"
Sadness is hard to hide and the night can rebirth places missed and needed. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Years Ago


Lizardo

2 Years Ago

Thank you for such a great review! really thank you.
Coyote Poetry

2 Years Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

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Added on September 30, 2015
Last Updated on September 30, 2015
Tags: Life, Teen, days

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Lizardo
Lizardo

LA , CA



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