From Me to You!

From Me to You!

A Poem by Lizzy

I look at you

You pass me by

I whisper to you

You turn me down

I cry for you

You walk away

I call you

You hang up

I ring your bell

You slam the door

I forget about you

Now you want me

You look at me

I sit there and laugh

You ask me why

I say you had your chance

You start to cry

I say good bye

© 2008 Lizzy


Author's Note

Lizzy
so the thing i wanted to show is that if you are going to regret or want to change something then you should think about it before you reject the whole idea...

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I like a woman who tells it like it is. Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Excellent work. The flow and cadence of the piece reminds me a great deal of the early works of Thoreau. The simply yet honest emotion you project in this piece is captivating. Again, Top Notch work.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 13, 2008
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