Wondering

A poem love and it's Intricacies

As I sit here wondering
How this came to be.
I can't help but think of my blundering
how it only separated you from me.
The thoughts swirl round and round
Like an unsettled sea,
The current is only getting stronger
As the strokes I take get longer
And soon cease to be.
Although I am not gone,
I can no longer see,
The vision in my head,
No longer clear to me.
Of a time when we were one,
And always fill with joy,
The anxiousness and sorrow
Slowly being undone,
But now that time is hard
Becoming more rare,
And now I sit here wondering
Do you still care?

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

This is a beautiful piece of writing. I could feel the emotion in this, very strongly.